to be obscure and awk. won’t let emotions leak in all this. but allow the awk. as better alternative to ____. what is missing.
June 23, 2007 by J
to be obscure and awk. won’t let emotions leak in all this. but allow the awk. as better alternative to ____. what is missing.
Pinning the tale is painful;
the prick of the tack
is the least of it.
Who wants to be seen
spinning in place, stumbling
about, feeling the way?
If we told the party that,
sighted, we could push
the pin in just as deeply
would they agree?
Very interesting poem– on a lot of different levels!
I’ll have to think up a response to your response….
; )